Critique of 《E-Finance: An Introduction》
In “E-Finance: An Introduction”, the author wants to introduce a new type of finance – E-finance by describing electronic technology’s impacts on financial services firms, payment systems and securities markets. This essay is for those readers who have a little knowledge of finance for the author employs many professional terms. The structure of the essay is quite clear and every paragraph is logically organized. At the beginning of each passage there is a suitable topic sentence and the author uses precise definition, reasonable analysis and various examples to support the topic sentence. For instance, when describing “disintermediation”, the author explains many important concepts like liquidity, securitization and so on in order to help readers understand the reasons of disintermediation. Besides that he also uses believable facts such as a recent Federal Reserve Board Report to elaborate the main idea. In conclusion, the author displays the facts and his own opinions very well to enable readers learn a lot from his essay.
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The E-business is becoming more and more popular these days. From your illustration, I can feel the hard work you have made. The fact is supported adequately, and your critical thinking is really interesting!
hi, this is lulu~~~~generally, you present you critical thinking very well. from you presenting, i know that you have already learn theories from last two weeks, therefore, you can you these theory to explain some questions that is quite good. i know your so smart and you also work hard.....
I love this critique!!
you did very well. Actually, there are lot of things we need to think about. Only in this way ,can we succeed in our bussiness or profession
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